The Submission is one of
those books that plays with the controversy of its topic. Amy Waldman, former co-chief
of the South Asia bureau of The New York Times, writes this novel trying to
recreate a portrait of the fears of prejudices of a society suffering from
ignorance and irritation, as well as the capacities to forgive and show
forgiveness.
An art jury gathers in NYC
in 2003 in order to judge and decide which submission is the winner for a
memorial where the twin towers once stood. The anonymity of the contest leads
the judges to choose a submission called ‘The Garden’ that turns out to be
designed by Mohammad Khan, an American-born and non-practicing Muslim.
Waldman describes perfectly
well the agitation of the characters in the novel balancing the emotions of the
reticent jury and the public’s emotion, especially those family members of the
victims. Thus, she sets up a debate that mixes up topics such as religious
freedom, cultural identity and immigration.
The story works thanks to
one of Waldman’s most prominent skills, storytelling. Her sense of plot and her
eye for small details, along with her cinematic and smooth writing, her cogent
dialogue and the fast-paced rhythm of the writing are the strengths of The Submission.
However, it is perfectly
recognizable her journalist grounding. Sometimes, even the story works and the
style is pleasant, there are some weak points that impoverish the whole
perception of the book.
Perhaps, the most evident is
the multiple perspectives point of view, that weakness the characters and make
them plain. The main characters, Mohammed and Claire appear detached from the
reader and it is complicated to feel empathy with their issues. The secondary
characters, like the journalist, anti-memorial activists, the Bangladeshi wife
of a victim, the politician, among a others, enriches the background of the
story, but most of them are stiff and they all sound pretty much the same.
The ending located 20 years
after the time of the story probably is surprising and pleasing, as Waldman
imagines an America healed from its paranoid mood, leaving suspicion Muslims
behind, showing her own optimism in the future.
The Submission
does not offer new reflections on or understandings of 9/11. It excels at
bringing up again many of the 9/11 issues and leading the readers to rethink
their preconceived ideas, resorting to sentimental and thought-provoking fictional
arguments that seem really true to life.